Since my last draft i have been to film at bridlington beach, therefor a lot of the blank spaces that were in my first draft have now been filled with new shots. However the editing is still not complete and due to the foggy weather i haven't been able to get a chance to film the outside forest filming that will fill the blank spaces in this draft. My audience feedback from this video was very positive and I'm excited to finish the final draft.
James weston said "The pictures overlapping the first three shots look really cool"
"You've done a great job of syncing the lip singing with the audio"
"The sun inside the eye zoom looks really cool"
"The bath scene is so cool, the hair creeping over is creep but suits the genre and the individual ideology of Florence."
"The swap of the feet on the beach to the shot on the stairs is a good cut and again is a great effect."
"The way you have made each picture disappear on the bath scene is really effective and the fact you got them dissapearing on the beat of the audio is even better".
He also said that the black and white effect throughout the video with hints of colour suits the genre especially" I chose this as the effect florence has on her ancillary texts looks really good so i counted the colour scheme into my own ancillary texts and music video"
Another peer had her own feed back.
Saskia said "Nice use of black and white in the overlapping scenes and with the genre of the song"
"The narrative comes through really clearly, it also fits with the lyrics of the song and is easy to follow"
"The editing flows really well, especially in the bath scene"
"I love the wave over the high angle shot of the bath"
"There is nice continuity with the walking on the sand to walking up the stairs"
For improvement she said:
"Add more transitions and effects between shots to show the flow in the video"
"Fill the gaps asap to see a better outcome"
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