My first draft

Here is my first draft of my music video. There are many improvements to be made but as a first draft i am pleased with the outcome, however the blank spaces where the music is playing are where i have not got footage for that part. This was due to poor weather conditions as the spaces left are for filming to be shot outside. Another issue was arranging to meet up as we are both very busy and our schedules did not always match.

I chose to make most of the music video black and white as it linked with my artist and made the whole video come together and flow better.


When showing my peers i had a alot of feedback both posotive comments and improvements that could be made. These are shown below form a range of people.

Racheal Bower said: "I love the shot where emily is shown in the bath and then she gradually slides down to the shot showing just her hair coming over the side of the bath". "I also liked how it was in slow motion".

"I like how you have linked the footage to the lyrics of the song, for example when it says piano she is sat playing at a piano".

"I also like the overlapping that you have done with some of the footage as it creates a really cool effect".

"I think you shouls remove the face saying 'over the love of you' that overlaps the bath scene as the pictures disaperaing in that shot are a great effect on their own".


Vicky Harmen said: "I really like the part where  Emily is running down the corridor. I like how it is in slow motiona s it creates a really good effect."

Vicky also said "I love the bath scene, its so good".

"The black and white effect goes really well with the overall theme and artist".

"Just fill in the blanks and it will be a really good interview".